Antigone Cadmus

Hey Thorned! Here as requested. :D The wind howled, sending items overboard into the billowing black ocean. This is weird. It promotes an image where the wind is so strong ...

Hey, Vandria! I'm Antigone, and I'll be your reviewer for today. Hmm, my biggest suggestion would be to break up these huge paragraphs into smaller ones. It is very intimidating ...

Ah, Catch-22. Simply a great book. My only problem was that I found it a bit wordy -- like, 100 pages too long. At the time, the skipping around bothered ...

Hey, Thorned Rose! I don't think I've critiqued anything by you yet. =P Time to fix that! So, I didn't spot any grammatical nit-picks that you can't fix with a ...

Hi Poseidon's Daughter (I love Greek Mythology :D)! I'm Antigone, and I'll be your reviewer today. Hmm, I think you'll benefit most from an overall review. The Abusive Father Abusive ...

Hi Leslie! I'm Antigone and I'll be your reviewer for today! ^_^ Your smile fades into a frown Her eyes are turned down Lifes all going wrong tonight Dreams have ...

I want to like this. I really, really do. But I can't. Complete lack of character depth really ruined this for me, sorry. So let's fix it! :D The brisk ...

Mmk. So, the grammar in this piece needs work. A lot, a lot, of work. Some quick grammar tips: --Always capitalise I --Contractions such as "I will" have an apostrophe... ...

Kamas!

Here again, as requested. So. I really do not see much change here. But you --did-- change Gabriel's name. Schweet. You have my comments on the original piece, so this ...

Bon soir, Jetpack. :D Here as requested! Please not that I'm super lazy, and I tend not to read the critiques before mine. Repeating of things is often common in ...

Hey Dakota! Ha, I'm totally entering this conest too. Glad to help out a rival :twisted:! So let's get to the critique, as I ramble far too much in introductions. ...

Bonjour, mon amie! (Mes amis would be many friends xD) Well, this is... short. :shock: Post more next time! There's hardly anything to critique, but I'll try... My name is ...

>-< There's a problem with this. It's written fine, but I do see a ton of grammar issues. But besides that, you're going to have a big porble writing about ...

Hello, Wolf! I don't believe we've met. *shakes hand* So, I totally clicked on this story because I saw the word flesh. xD I think I may be a bit ...